Score: 8

"Not bad."

submission: Eggman's Run Away {Ext Final}

date: September 20, 2007

So this used to be one second before the one minute extension?

Joking aside, I think you did pretty well. It's 1:30 am, so I'm not going to leave anything spectacular. What you have is basic, but that's not a bad thing here. It could be slightly better on the percussion side, but that's just me. Great job overall.

Score: 5

"Underdriven."

submission: Overdrive Remix

date: August 27, 2007

This remix wasn't that great when keeping in mind the original song by DJ Scot Project, in my opinion. Some of the notes in the melody were altered significantly and not in an enhanced or better way when I feel the melody would have been better kept in its original form. The new original melody that you brought wasn't too bad with its high pitched notes and oriental feeling. The end was rather abrupt.

The synth you used here could have been much better. The bass was lacking a harder, more dignified stance. Percussion was top notch, however.

Ultimately, I feel the notes of all the melodies should have been kept original. The alterations really did not appeal to me, and neither did the synth used in producing those melodies. I think this remix can really be improved if the will came to it.

Score: 7

"Not Bad"

submission: Elevation

date: August 25, 2007

I've noticed that in your songs you use the same melody through and through. It doesn't seem to stop at all, and although the method used in portraying the melody changes, the melody is the essentially same throughout, and people would consider this too repetitive and boring. That's not necessarily bad here, since it's considered a dance song, but your other songs lack in deep change.

I also felt that your percussion was lacking here, which I've noticed in some of your other tracks. Try and work in that area.

Great work on, again, your bass, synth, and drums. Keep it up.

Score: 8

"Good"

submission: (skyline)

date: August 25, 2007

While I'm not a big fan of "happy" trance or techno, the use of drums, bass, and synth were really well in this collaboration. I felt, however, that the percussion was slacking. Other than that, great track.

Score: 10

"LMAO"

submission: "Kid" prank to pizza place

date: August 24, 2007

The end was so damn hilarious!

Oh man, you have to do more of these.

Score: 8

"Really nice."

submission: Electrick - Esphere

date: August 23, 2007

Not much in the mood to leave a lot of criticism right now, so I'll say what I can. I thought this was a really great track. I really liked the synth, and the piano laid a soft feeling to it. It all went together really well. Nice job!

Score: 6

"Not too bad."

submission: Electrick - Sunrise Drive

date: August 23, 2007

Percussion was top notch, but the main synth just didn't work for me, nor did the vocals. The car effect just did not fit, I think... Other than that, it was real good. Keep up the good work.

Score: 9

"Amazing Piece"

submission: [GF]Lost-In-Translation[GF]

date: August 23, 2007

I was absolutely stunned at the beginning! My eyes literally widened from the surprise that I had been given. The synth, the percussion, the bass--it's all flawless. Favoriting this song. Very very nice job, I'd LOVE to hear more songs like this from you!

Score: 7

"Good, albeit "happy"."

submission: [GF]6-LiL-EggZ[GF]

date: August 23, 2007

I can't say much about the "happy" side of trance (don't like it much), but this was actually rather interesting. May I ask where the vocals came from? The voice, while it may be altered, is very unique. I like it a lot. I'm not all for the words, but the voice fits perfectly. Nice job!

Score: 8

"Simple, but sweet."

submission: 80's Beat

date: August 23, 2007

Sounds like some 80s porn, especially starting at 0:48 up to 0:56! *dances*

It's quite simple, but I think that's a good thing here. There's really not much else for me to say since it's under Miscellaneous. Good work!